Pokemon Fan Comic:L.O.S.T

page six

June 22nd, 2017, 9:44 pm
i'm a lazy person ;-;
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Fire storm June 22nd, 2017, 9:49 pm
i made a lot of mistakes on this page.ayyy

i'm proud of it tho x3
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Fire storm July 7th, 2017, 3:33 am
um there wont be comics this week cus i spent the entire two weeks of the summer holiday on vacation.
( 0_0 )
and i spent this week making the new cover. ^_^;
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ShadowStalker1128 June 23rd, 2017, 7:37 am
You improoooved
WildfireK June 23rd, 2017, 10:40 am
Look at that shading
That glare is utterly astouding
ShadowStalker1128 July 7th, 2017, 10:10 am
@Fire storm: THAT COVER IS AMAZING
WildfireK July 7th, 2017, 8:36 pm
@ShadowStalker1128:
IKR

That's it I'm making anew cover soon as I get back
ShadowStalker1128 July 7th, 2017, 8:37 pm
@WildfireK: really? I'm inking up a new cover page myself XD

Like literally right now
WildfireK July 7th, 2017, 8:37 pm
@ShadowStalker1128:

Ooooh nice

Though the old one's still great
ShadowStalker1128 July 7th, 2017, 8:40 pm
@WildfireK: I know. But it isn't really my current style. Also, some thing son it bother me. It seems like Tess is the only main character, whilst Volt is just as important. It also looks like Tess Eevee and Tess Umbreon are two different characters. Im keeping the overall format of the cover, but I'm changing those things
WildfireK July 7th, 2017, 8:41 pm
@ShadowStalker1128:
Okay dokie!

Yus it's hard to fit multiple protags on a cover and have it be simple like Firestorm's masterpiece
Bleh
ShadowStalker1128 July 8th, 2017, 11:52 am
@WildfireK: ugh ikr

Hey that reminds me; in the end, are you going to reboot SaS?
WildfireK July 8th, 2017, 11:57 am
@ShadowStalker1128:
Like when I get back from vacation?

Yes, I will, but I'll a few days to rework the plot
Fire storm July 7th, 2017, 10:15 pm
@ShadowStalker1128: AHH THANK YOU
SilverSail (Guest) July 8th, 2017, 9:18 pm
Criticism

- Not to be rude but your anatomy needs a lot of reworking. Try finding out how a tree / Liepard looks like first before drawing it out.

- Your shading is okay but they are everywhere at the moment. For example the belly area should have shade because the light wouldn't be able to reach there.

The sun is not a spotlight. It does not shine at one particular row and leave the others in the dark. Thats not how sun works.

- When doing dialogue don't add tiny hashtags or words that do not relate to the plot at all as it makes the page messy. Try to stick with an identical background for each page.

- Add more expression! All 3 panels have the Liepard smiling and it looks very copy and pasted or very unnatarul and fake.
Fire storm July 8th, 2017, 11:00 pm
@SilverSail:

Thanks , I'll try to improve.

-I know my anatomy sucks and i'm trying to improve it by looking at actual animals.

-I did look at a liepard before drawing it out ( did i draw it wrongly or something? ).

-Can't draw trees.LOL.Yeah,I am trying to like draw a proper one.It's like my goal or something.

-i have no idea how suns work.I'm a stupid person.

-Wait.So i'm suppose to use the same background each page?

You remind me of...someone i know.0_0

you sound like a good artist , can you maybe teach me how to draw properly?it's okay if you don't want to.
ShadowStalker1128 July 9th, 2017, 7:07 am
@Fire storm: guests can't PM you :3

The only issue I see with the liepard itself is that it's muzzle is too long and narrow. I used to do this too, but a leopard's muzzle is shorter :3
Fire storm July 9th, 2017, 10:21 pm
@ShadowStalker1128: Oh yeah i just noticed that
Lily the Espeon July 10th, 2017, 8:51 pm
why do i exist